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Review of The Average Girl by Angelina Goode @angelina_goode #romcom #review

The Average GirlAbout the Book:


Title: The Average Girl
Author: Angelina Goode
Publisher: Beach Blanket Publishing
Pages: 228
Genre: Romantic Comedy

Being average can lead to wonderful things…

Olivia Fowler, helper of the star-struck, runs a successful business helping average people meet celebrities in everyday ways. Flawless at what she does, the celebrities don’t have a clue they’re part of a pre-planned meeting. Business is booming and Olivia knows everything there is to know about Hollywood’s famous and their behavior. Her clients trust her because she is just like them, not famous.

But when Olivia accidentally meets the super-famous Alexander Young at the grocery store, her world is flipped upside-down. She can’t possibly resist those charming eyes and sexy arms. As their romance blossoms, Olivia learns she may not know as much as she thought she did about celebrities and their ways.

Then Olivia’s most important and loyal client requests to meet Alexander. Suddenly, Olivia is forced to choose between her love and her business.

Will Olivia be able to keep her booming business a secret from her soon-to-be boyfriend? Will her clients still trust her if she is no longer the average girl?

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Book Excerpt:

I sit quietly at the Starbucks on the corner of Wilshire and Santa Monica Boulevard, pretending to work on my laptop. Two tables away from me and next to the condiment counter sits my client, Sarah, drinking coffee and pretending to read a book. This is our second day at this Starbucks and we have already been here for forty minutes. I am beginning to wonder if we should re-evaluate our plan.

Suddenly a wave of hushed excitement spreads through the store. Everyone’s eyes are glued to the swinging front doors as Ryan Scott strides through with his shoulders back and chin up. Everyone’s eyes, that is, but Sarah’s. She looks at me without turning her head, and I give her the tiniest of nods before spinning back around to stare. She responds to my nod by feigning interest in her Jane Austen novel.

Great Sarah! Keep calm. I know you want to burst inside, but play it cool.

Ryan’s eyes quickly scan the room. Before they return to the menu board, they briefly linger on Sarah, the only person who appears not to notice him. He orders his grande latte with a double shot of espresso and leans smugly against the counter with his arms folded across his chest. He appears to be staring into space, yet every few moments his eyes fall back to Sarah, who has still not looked up from her book.

The barista calls his name, and he pauses to make sure everyone hears it before he reaches for the drink. When he turns around, Sarah is beginning to pack her things, leaving the Austen novel on the table. He heads toward the condiment counter for his regular three sugars. Just as we had rehearsed, Sarah stands up, still focused on packing up, and he tries to pass her. He stops for a moment, Sarah blocking his way.

Thank goodness these celebrities are creatures of habit. It makes my job so much easier.

“Oh, I’m sorry, I didn’t see you there.” She breathes calmly as she speaks to him. She slings her navy-blue Coach bag over her shoulder and smiles, her head leaning to the side, her eyes soft.

“That’s all right,” Ryan responds. He stands waiting for her to move but blocks her exit. He half smiles at her.

“Okay then.” Sarah glances toward the door behind him, still smiling.

“Oh, now I’m in your way,” he declares as he steps aside and watches Sarah move toward the door. “Wait, hey, your book!”

I exhale. The one contingency worked as planned. Should be easy from here on out, as long as she sticks to the script.

She stops and turns back, hiding her smile. Ryan stands there, holding her book in his hands. “Jane Austen, huh.” He smirks. “I’m shooting a movie based on one of her books next month.”

“Oh, you’re an actor. What book?” she asks, pretending not to know.

Pride and Prejudice.” He seems intrigued by Sarah’s indifference. “Well, here you go—” He ends his sentence by fishing for her name.

“Sarah,” she finishes for him.

“Sarah,” he repeats, revealing a slow, sexy smile, “maybe we can have a cup of coffee next time.” He holds out the book but is not loosening his grip.

“Yes, maybe.” She takes the book from him, and he lets her. “Thanks.” Then she is out the door. Ryan turns and grabs his three sugars, looking around the room again to make sure everyone is still watching. Before he finishes stirring them in, I am out on the street and dialing Sarah’s cell number.

“Wow! That was unbelievable! I can’t believe it worked!” she cries.

“You were awesome! Did you see the way he looked at you?” I ask.

“Yes! I did!” She pauses. “Thank you so much, Olivia. You really made my dream come true. I mean, I never could have done this without you. I’m going to recommend you to all my friends,” she rattles on.

Thrilled that all went as planned, I head back down Santa Monica Boulevard toward my office.


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Finally, a good clean romance that anyone can read and love.  As most know, I like the good, clean romance and want to have the big sigh at the end of the book.  Ms. Goode delivers and more.  In fact, she made me think about all the hockey players that I met when I worked for the Dallas Stars and I will have to say my biggest fan moment wasn’t when I met Wayne Gretzky or even Joe Nieuwendyk (my all time favorite player) or Mario Lemiuex.  Oh no, it was when I meet Keith Tkachuk when he played for the Phoenix Coyotes.  You see, we met at the club after the game in Dallas by accident.  I swear, it really was an accident.  Come to find out that we were related, by marriage, through my Canadian cousins.  *thud*  Now, was I fan of him?  Somewhat, he was a great hockey player but I was more interesting in meeting Brian Leetch from the New York Rangers.  Hey, I named my son after him.  (And yes, I finally did meet Brian and yes, I almost fainted).  My point is that regardless of the fact that Keith was a famous hockey player, he was a person.  We had a blast just sitting there talking about my family in Canada.  Not a word about hockey.  Just family.  A couple of days later, the Stars front office called me and said that they had something for me at the next game.  It was a signed jersey from Keith with a note.  He didn’t have to do that but it just goes to show you that famous people are just that…people.

Ms. Goode writes about the celebrities in the book has completely relatable.  Not to mention that some are just as normal as you or I.  Alexander and Brad are just normal people who live in the spotlight.  It’s not what defines them but in our eyes it does.  Olivia was just trying to do a job and she was good at it.  She enjoyed it and it brought so much joy to her clients.  I got that and enjoyed listening to her stories with her clients.  The one that I liked the most was the teen client.  Oh, how I remember those years.

The conflict in the book is real and makes sense to me.  I realize that at some point you have to suspend some belief but I never did.  I didn’t tell everyone that I worked for the Dallas Stars hockey club.  People knew that I went to hockey games but most thought it was just as a fan.  LOL!  I didn’t want the hanger-on’s, etc.   If I had one complaint to would be that they were apart too long for me.  But hey, that’s just me.  🙂

Another thing that I truly liked was the secondary characters Maria, Charlie, and Preston.  They brought depth and friendship to Olivia.  Maria was a hoot; Preston is the overprotective brother and Charlie (poor Charlie…needs his own book), the guy that finally understood Olivia’s feelings for Alexander were real.

I laughed a lot in this book.  Yes, laughed.  Sighed, shook my head and smiled HUGE at the end.  This story and characters had heart.  It is definitely on the keeper shelf on the Kindle.


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About the AuthorAngelina Goode

Angelina Goode began writing as a teenager. Though her first works were poems about love-struck teenagers, she grew her craft while earning her degree in Journalism and Creative Writing. A former grade school teacher that loved teaching children to write, she enjoys finding creative ways to present everyday events. Now she primarily writes light-hearted contemporary women’s fiction. She lives in Los Angeles where she enjoys the occasional celebrity sighting and year-round sun.

Angelina started gaining first-hand fan and celebrity experience as a devoted follower of her generation’s boy band. Her experience shifted in college when she interned in the promotions department for a Los Angeles based radio station and for the public relations department of a network television station. There she was able to learn about the ins and outs of promoting celebrities and all the backstage activities that are rarely seen by the public eye. She was also able to observe fans’ behavior from an objective perspective, seeing what it looks like to an outside observer.

Now she combines her experience as a loyal fan attending numerous concerts and meet and greets every year, her brief but educational stint in the entertainment industry, and a highly active imagination to create fiction for celebrity lovers of all ages.

Her latest book is the romantic comedy, The Average Girl.

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