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Review of Her Immortal Viking by Adele Downs

Her Immortal Viking_coverHER IMMORTAL VIKING by Adele Downs

Viking Warrior. Immortal Slave. Freed by Love.

Penny pleads for divine intervention from overwork and mountainous debt one desperate, lonely night. She sings songs of praise, chants like a yogi, and rubs her belly like Buddha until the crystal charm on her navel shimmers, hoping to draw the attention of someone up there.

From the place between heaven and earth, in the west beyond the seas, an immortal hears Penny’s cries. Once a fearless Viking warrior, Gunnar has been cast into eternal servitude by an angry god and made a Light Elf. While Penny sleeps, he comes to earth from Alfheim for a single night to complete her tasks. When she awakens and confronts him, the handsome immortal kisses her, sparking a night of forbidden passion. By dawn, the couple has fallen in love.

Dark forces target Penny, seeking revenge for Gunnar’s earthly misdeeds. To protect his mortal lover, Gunnar takes up his sword to defend her. Though his strength and courage are unmatched, it might be the power of Gunnar and Penny’s love that saves them both.


He smoothed her hair and rubbed a thick tendril between his thumb and forefinger. “I am Gunnar.” He pronounced the name Goo-nar.

An emblem of the sun, surrounded by a circle, had been branded on the back of his powerful hand. Penny touched the scar while he held a length of her hair, recognizing Freyr’s sacred insignia from her textbooks. “The pain must have been excruciating.” Without thinking, she lifted the old wound to her mouth and laid kisses along its perimeter before pressing a kiss to the icon inside.

Tremors vibrated across her lips when they touched the ancient symbol and her body tingled with the contact. The brand grew warm and then hot against her mouth, though it did not burn. She ran her tongue over the thick scars to erase the heat, and then licked the center, finishing with a tiny swirl.

Gunnar’s gasp of surprise was the last thing she expected when she lifted her head. He released her hair and drew away.

“I’m sorry. I don’t know what got into me. Have I offended you?” She’d always been popular with men, and comfortable around them, but her behavior with Gunnar was bold, even for her. She sat up. “Am I under some kind of spell?”

Gunnar shook his head. “I used my powers to heal you, but your free will remains intact.”

She searched his face for clues about what to do next, because desire shone behind the wary expression in his eyes. Something else shone there, too. Gratitude. Penny waited for Gunnar’s reply without letting go of his disfigured hand.

He said, “Kindness isn’t something I’m used to finding. Perhaps you’d be less inclined toward compassion if you knew what I’d done to deserve this brand of servitude.”

She reached out and draped an arm around his neck to bring him closer. Their gazes locked and held. Gunnar’s eyes were like pools of ice blue water that pulled her in and down.

Her breathing slowed while the sound of her heartbeat rushed blood through her ears. “I am Penelope. And if you’re from Alfheim, I know who and what you are. I just don’t understand why you’re here.” How could she deserve his rare, benevolent gifts? She was just an ordinary woman from an ordinary town, barely scraping by.

His warm breath grazed her cheek in shallow rushes, lifting goose bumps across her skin. His wide, firm mouth smelled of sweet ground parsley and fresh-picked mint. “Sometimes we get what we need, simply because we ask. That’s the beauty and power of the unexpected.”


Ever read a book by an author that you just love without even reading the blurb?  Yes, this is that one book.  Two reason why I agreed to read it:  Adele Downs is the author (LOVE HER) and the cover.  Okay and it was about a Viking…sorta.  I didn’t realize that it had fantasy elements in it much less some suspense elements.  As one can guess I don’t read fantasy at all.  I can’t keep up with all the players, places, settings and then the world itself.  I guess that’s why Game of Thrones, Lord of the Rings, etc. just doesn’t interest me that much.  Too much to remember and keep up with.  That said, I LOVE Thor so go figure.  So I took a chance with Ms. Downs leading me into a genre that I just didn’t understand much less read.  Boy, I am so glad that did.  🙂

What made this story so powerful and rich for me actually were the fantasy elements in it.  I didn’t have to have a map, roster, understanding of the world or for that matter, whatever place she was taking me.  Its set in two different places.  Earth and Alfheim.  Earth is Earth…boring and drab compared to the fantasy world.  Fascinating characters that has a king, demons, warriors, elves, fairies, etc. that held my interest from the first time that I was introduced to them.  Of course, I will saw it took me a little bit to warm up to Penny.  Good gosh that girl had the worst of times and I really could feel her despair when she first summoned Gunnar.  In fact, at times Penny had the best lines in the book.  From her trying to get Gunnar to understand human sayings (throwing him under the bus) to feeling hopeless when she couldn’t just summon him up again.

Gunnar was a dream and I really wanted justice for him in the end.  What surprised me about him was his speech to Skinner in the end.  Wow!  Another scene that really sealed it for me with Gunnar was when Miguel showed up again.  OMG!  I actually laughed out loud.  Great scene and I can sure bet that no one will ever mess with Penny…ever.  Plus, he made Penny see that she was worthy of love, too.  For someone that hadn’t been around women for a very long time, he truly didn’t know how to love and be loved in returned.

And this is what the story is all about.  Realizing that you are worthy of love and being loved in return.  Sure this story had sensual sex, romance galore, rituals, humor in all the right places and a hero to swoon over.  But in the end its about two people that completed each other heart, body and soul.  And did I mention that I would definitely seek out other fantasy books now.  Well, baby steps.  😉  At least I hope that Ms. Downs returns to Gunnar and Penny in the future.  I would love to see how his world deals with his offspring.  Hint, hint.


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About the Author:

Adele Downs writes best-selling contemporary romance inside the office of her rural Pennsylvania home. She is a former journalist, published in newspapers and magazines inside the USA, UK, and Caribbean.

Adele is an active member of Romance Writers of America and her local RWA chapter where she serves as a past-president. She has written several articles for RWR magazine (Romance Writers Report) and has presented workshops for writers.

When Adele isn’t working on her current project, she can be found riding in her convertible or reading a book on the nearest beach.


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2 thoughts on “Review of Her Immortal Viking by Adele Downs

  1. Thank you for reading and reviewing my new release HER IMMORTAL VIKING and for your kind words. I’m so glad you enjoyed the book, despite not being a fan of fantasy romance. Ironically, this is the first fantasy novella I’ve ever written. I like your idea of continuing with Gunnar and Penny’s children. I’ll have to think about that…


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