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Enthrall by Vanessa Fewings – Excerpt/Review/Giveaway

This is the world of the forbidden. This is the embrace of Enthrall.

Mia Lauren is a single, twenty-one-year old working in a West Hollywood art store who dreams of one day becoming a fashion designer. When an unexpected offer arises to work at Enthrall, L.A.’s premier fetish club for the wealthy, Mia accepts. It’s a salary beyond her wildest imagination.

Mia becomes the secretary to the club’s assistant director, blond and broody Richard Booth. Richard is not only one of L.A.’s most beautiful and wealthiest men, he is also the club’s senior dominant. Mia is both drawn and terrified when he reveals flashes of his white-hot passion, threatening an unbound pleasure like no other. She knows her attraction may be her undoing, but the spellbinding feelings render her powerless to resist his advances. 

What Mia cannot know is that Enthrall’s dashing director thirty-year-old Cameron Cole, who is also the club’s psychiatrist, has lured Mia to save his best friend and patient Richard from his obsession with thrill seeking. Cameron masterfully sets up sexy scenarios to ensure the collision of Richard and Mia, hoping that love will save him. 

However, despite Cameron’s noble intentions, he also finds himself enticed by Mia’s haunting innocence. Passion and pleasure stir, forming a dangerous love triangle. This is the world of the forbidden. This is the embrace of Enthrall.

Excerpt 2 –  Rated R for language

Richard blinked through dark blond lashes. “You realize what it is I want to do to you?”“Yes.”With the window closed, this room lacked the air we both needed so desperately. From the way his chest rose and fell he too must have felt short of breath.He raised his chin in defiance. “Say it.”

“You want to dominate me.”

“Subjugate you.” He stepped closer. “Control you. Conquer you.” His left hand rested against my chest and he eased me back against the wall again and pressed hard. “Fuck you.”

Oh please.

He looked hesitant. “Mia, I have never taken on an untrained submissive.”

“What does that mean?”

“They’ve always come to me primed.”


“Already trained.”

“By who?” I sucked in my breath. “Cameron?”

Richard stepped closer and brushed a stray hair out of my eyes.

“I want it to be you,” I said softly.

“You deserve someone better than me.”

“Don’t I get a say?”

“Right up until the moment you agree to become my submissive. Then all choice is lost.” He narrowed his gaze. “You wouldn’t want that. Would you?”

My legs felt weak. I breathed a sigh of sadness when his hand fell once more to his side, threatening never to touch me again.

“You and I are miles apart,” he said.

“Are you trying to convince yourself? Or me?”

“What is our common ground?”

“You don’t think I’m good enough for you?” My voice broke with emotion. “Is that it?”

“Other way round.” He looked intently. “You are innocence incarnate.”

I broke his gaze, my heart aching with the thought I’d failed him, failed me.

My inner musing told me to stay strong, tell him want I really wanted, needed. Him, it had only ever been him.

My words flowed from an unfamiliar place. “I’m returning to the balcony. If you find the strength to face what we both know, that there’s real chemistry between us, join me. Ask me out on a date. I may even say yes.” I picked up his glass of wine and strolled off with it, leaving him standing there. I headed across the living room and out onto the balcony.

Facing the breeze, I let it wash over me, inhaling the freshest air. This place offered a new start. The promise of fulfillment close enough to touch…

If I dared to reach out to it.

After several minutes of savoring the view, I regretted my outburst, letting him know my true feelings. I downed the rest of the wine, taking pleasure from knowing his lips had brushed where mine were now on the glass. The softest sigh escaped me.

I turned around—

Richard leaned against the balcony doorjamb. “Start slow?” His alluring blue gaze burning fiercely into mine.


“Are you sure this is something you want?” he whispered. “I’m not good at compromise.”

“I know.”

“What do you have in mind?” he said.

“Chrysalis’s party tomorrow night. Let me go with you.”

He twisted his mouth as though mulling over it.

“Pick me up tomorrow at six,” I said.

Richard stepped onto the balcony. “You do realize I’m the dominant.” He towered over me, emphasizing his point. “An issue you would be wise not to forget.”

Damn, that turned me on.

I stretched out my arms to either side and clutched the handrail. “Your irises dilate when I push back.”

Don’t push back. Cameron warned he prefers malleable.

Could I be this woman? Could I fall at Richard’s feet and become his sex slave? What was I willing to give up in order to become his lover? His submissive.


I’d do anything.

He shifted closer. “What else do you see?”

“That you want this as much as I do.”

“Some things are inevitable.”  His expression softened, his face now serene. “I have so much to show you.”

“I want that.”

“Mia.” He narrowed his gaze, his intensity returning. “Are you truly ready for such blinding pleasure?”

A flurry of what felt like butterflies burst out of my chest. Tingles of excitement caused me to shiver, and an exquisite ache in my belly settled low. In the deepest depths of my soul I felt ready for this, for him.

“It’s a good thing we’re not alone,” he said.

“Not that it matters,” I said. “I only ever see you.”

Richard’s frown dissolved and he ran his fingers through his golden locks.

“I’ll see you tomorrow then,” I whispered breathlessly, melting in the wake of his stunning smile.

I know what y’all are thinking?  Not another BDSM book about the barely legal virgin and the Dominant, billionaire jerk that she falls in love with?  Virgin falls right in line with the BDSM lifestyle and signs her life away?  This book is so NOT that but it also much more than you think.
1.  Mia is young, 21, a virgin but when she applied for the job, she needs the money for a specific reason.  Yes, she knows nothing about BDSM and what all it encompasses but she open-minded about it and is willing to learn.  After all, she is the assistant director secretary.
2.  Richard is the typical tormented hero and Dominant in the story.  He is the assistant director at Enthrall and Mia’s boss.  While I was reading though, I knew that there was much more that the author wasn’t going to give up in the beginning about him and once his layers were peeled back…his reluctance to Mia made for a richer story.  🙂
3.  Cameron is the club therapist and more or less pushes Mia and Richard together.  He knows that Mia would be good for Richard but a bit of himself craves her too.  Don’t worry about a triangle and anything icky…the author does not go there but I would like Cameron to have his own book  🙂
4.  The Dommes/Tara/Bailey are a hoot.  They are like Mama Bears that protected Mia.  With them, Mia finds true friendship and also how to be a strong woman.  Mia doesn’t judge them and comes to understand their role in the business.  Plus, come on…I’d love to party with them.  Of course, bail money would need to be set aside.
5.  The club itself is a business.  Richard, Cameron, Mia and the Dommes work there.  This is their job and they like their job.  They bring pleasure/pain to the rich.  For them, it’s home where they are not judged and have somehow formed a family.  Just reading about the club in general made a bit jealous.
6.  But Harlie is there sex in the book?  Yes, but again it’s not what you think.  It’s not hard-core BDSM and you don’t need a primer to figure out what in the heck is going on.  This is a story about finding yourself and falling in love.  Yes, there is submission/dominance…just read it.  Even newbies will fall in love with Mia and Richard.
7.  The romance aspect of the book was sweet, too.  Yes, this is a romance book and watching it unfold while reading was breathtaking.  Ms. Fewings took her time with her characters and it showed.  In depth characterizations, too so that you understood where they were in the book.  No head scratching…and searching back in the book to figure something out.
8.  There was also humor in the book.  Yes, in most BDSM books there is very little humor but in Enthrall, the humorous moments are there and perfectly placed.  Watching Mia and Richard fall in love, listening to their private thoughts and then humor…again… this is NOT a typical BDSM book.
9.  I’m sorry that I’ve taken a lot of your time today but truly this is one of the BEST BDSM books that really wasn’t, that I’ve read in a very, very long time.  I didn’t read FSOG and I don’t intend to.  The whole premise of it bored me when it first came out and it got popular.  So when I read the blurb of the book, I admittedly thought, please not FSOG and it wasn’t.  Shoot, it wasn’t even about the lifestyle or reading BDSM sex scenes.  It was about two people falling in love and completing each other.  The Ying to the other Yang,
10.  I can’t wait to the next book in the series!  😉



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Vanessa Fewings (aka V.M.K. Fewings) is the award-winning author of The Stone Masters Vampire Series. Her first erotic novel, Enthrall, will be released later this summer. Prior to publishing, Vanessa worked as a registered nurse and midwife. She holds a Masters Degree in Psychology. She has travelled extensively throughout the world and has lived in Germany, Hong Kong, and Cyprus. Born and raised in England, Vanessa now proudly calls herself an American and resides in California with her husband. 
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