Hello from Harlie’s Book Blog. Thank you for finding me and participating. The prize for my blog is a $20 GC to either Amazon or B&N. For you reading pleasure, I’m going to share some snippets from a story that Harlie is working on. Just leave a comment w/email address after reading the snippets and let her know if you like or hate it. She can take the heat but keep in mind its unedited and raw. Yep, she is trying to write a story and it features an angel named Tony…Here you go…
Snippet #1
One night, Kim sat in her favorite chair reading the latest romance novel when she heard a noise from inside the house. That’s weird, she thought. Shaking her head, she went back to reading her book. A few minutes later, she heard the noise again but this time from a different part of the house. Okay, now this is freaking me out. I don’t have a dog or cat. No one lives here but me and I know that I locked all the windows and doors. Plus, with it not raining outside, the sound was a little eerie. Shrugging it off she went back to her book.
Perched on the sideboard in the dining room was figurine of an angel. This was no ordinary angel. This angel could move from room to room without the actual figurine moving from its perch. I always thought that some of grandmother’s figurine’s looked at me when I moved around the house. It gave me the creeps. The whole house was creepy. I inherited the house when her grandmother passed away last year. I swear, if I hadn’t needed a place to live, I wouldn’t have moved in here. Just then, another sound and it came from the kitchen. Okay, I’m going to bed. I can’t concentrate on my book with my “ghost” buddy moving around in the house. Leaving the lights on, I fixed the coffee pot for in the morning and walked upstairs to bed.
More tomorrow….
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I have a soft spot for both angels and demons.
Any tortured, sexy hero does it for me. 😉
Well, shoot.
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Stacey_dvn (at) yahoo (dot) com
Nice excerpt. I liked it.
bn100candg(at)hotmail(dot)com
The sneak peek was fun. I look forward to reading more. I am generally a Demon girl but I like to read about angels too.
geishasmom73 AT yahoo DOT com
Of course I read that snippet right before bed. I like them both, but I prefer demons, especially those with a bit of a soft side. I particularly like Al from Kim Harrison's Hallows series
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Thanks!
This sounds interesting. I would like to read more. The only thing I noticed and it is unedited I know was it went from 3rd person to 1st person. Cant wait to read the next one.
rachel at thejeepdiva dot com
Enjoyed the teasers!
I'm going to have to go with feathers over horns 🙂 Just as long as my angel has a little tarnish …
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Sounds very interesting. I love a good Demon book.
sstrode at scrtc dot com
Nice start. I love both angels and demons, but if I have to choose, I would go with demons.
manning_j2004 at yahoo dot com
Fantastic! Can't wait to check out more. Oh, and I pick angels! 🙂 emily joy drake at gmail dot com
I don't think I'd be able to sleep if I was too freaked to read 🙂
With angels vs. demons, I like my angels to be bad boy angels.
isabelli3619 (at) aol (dot) com
Definitely got my attention! Liked it!
Mel
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It was good. I pick angels.
mythic021@gmail.com
intriguing snippit!
mawmom@gmail.com
That was interesting!
suz2(at)cox(dot)net
Sounds great!
stephward84@hotmail.com
loved it! Gale pgan427@yahoo.com
I liked it. Can't wait for the rest of the story. Thanks for sharing, sounds like it is going to be a good one.
Christinebails@yahoo.com
Nice snippet! Thanks for sharing!
Dani
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Very Interesting snippets,makes me want to read more.DebP
r.d1@myfairpoint.net
Great job! Can't wait to read more:)
yadkny@hotmail.com
Great snippets! Thanks for sharing 🙂
laceyblossom1(at)gmail(dot)com
If I had a thumbs up emoticon I'd post it here.
I can't wait for more! Love it!
taghairmpyxi(at)aol(dot)com
Fun excerpt 🙂
valca85@aol.com
OOoo I really liked that! Can't wait to read more of it. 🙂
imsocool(at)gmail(dot)com
Great start, can I have more please 🙂 wondering what will happen when she goes to bed.
vampiremistress2010(at)gmail(dot)com
You have me intrigued!
brenda_dyer212@hotmail.com
Sounds good. Looking forward to reading more.
bacchus76 at myself dot com
Thanks for the snippets and the chance to win!
natasha_donohoo_8 at hotmail dot com
Thanks for the snippets!
Yvette
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I love stories like that, but I don't think I would go to bed with noises in the house.
proudarmymom32(at)yahoo(dot)com
Great setup. I want to know what happens next.
e.balinski(at)att(dot)net
The angel keep moving around? That's rather eerie but hooked me in.
I love Angels.
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It has me interested…not sure I would be able to just go to bed though.
Thanks!
mmafsmith at gmail dot com
You had me at “This was no ordinary angel.” For I'm an angel gal all the way…
vitajex(at)aol(dot)com
I love both Angels & Demons.
roseannh95@gmail(dot)com
I think it's a good setup!
~Krista
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Thanks for participating.
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I have questions about the excerpt but have a feeling that they would be answered with more of the story. Besides that, it was good!
molly(dot)frenzel(at)gmail(dot)com
Great setup…can't wait to check out part two! Totally relate…my grandma's house was creepy too except she didn't have a angel figurine she had a creepy clown pic that made me scared of clowns to this day…and my sister and cousins swear there was a pirate ghost upstairs (I don't know how a pirate landed in Missouri…but there was a definite presence upstairs)
andieleah78@gmail.com
Is it tomorrow, yet? I'm ready for the next snippet, please!
Thanks,
Tracey D
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I think its good. I would love to read more and find out what happens next. Tore923@aol.com
OOOH – what happens next?
jlhmass at yahoo dot com
oh…tease! lol. thanks for participating in the hop!
I love this story! Can't wait for you to finish.
Not too bad, rough but a decent idea started there.
sionedkla@gmail.com
It's an interesting beginning – it's pretty good for an unedited snippet.
junegirl63 at gmail dot com
Thanks for sharing,sounds good:)
reginamayross@gmail.com
Pretty good!
These ghost stories makes me kind of scared! LOL I don't the idea of ghosts being around us, which a lot believe there are. Thanks!
quite good ^^ i would like to read more of it
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