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Short Order Daddy, Surprise Billionaire (the Van Buren Brothers Series, Book 1) by Tabatha Foster – Review

 

 

Short Order Daddy, Surprise Billionaire

by Tabitha Foster

Contemporary Multicultural Romance

Published by Chances Press, LLC

Released on September 19, 2011

Heat Level: Steamy

Length: 162 pages

 

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Blurb:

Stranded on a sweltering Arizona roadside, billionaire CEO, Max Van Buren, is rescued by the gorgeous, independent, and sometime tow-truck driver, Allie. For several years her life has been devoted to raising her young son and running a very successful restaurant. When she offers the seemingly down-on-his-luck traveler a temporary job, she may not want to resist opening her heart for much longer.

 

Excerpt:

Maxwell Van Buren had never been this hot in his entire life. Sweat poured from his body and highlighted his defined biceps and pecs while also soaking his old Guns N’ Roses t-shirt. His muscles tensed. It felt like he was on fire. In some scenes, his appearance might even be sexy at that moment. Wet. Hot. Breathing heavy. Unfortunately, there wasn’t a damn thing erotic about his current situation.

 

“Piece of junk!” he exclaimed kicking the tire of his steaming rental car in frustration. This is what he got for renting a car from some place called Rent-A-Deal. The luxury convertible he had ordered for this trip had been mistakenly given to another customer, and all rental car places in Phoenix were booked due to ten simultaneous conventions except for…you guessed it…Rent-A-Deal which specialized in rental cars that had passed their prime many years earlier at other companies. If Max was going to continue with his trip, he had to have a car…any car. So, the 2001 Corolla seemed reliable enough at the time.

 

Now, he stood along a deserted highway in northern Arizona right smack in the height of summer. Max couldn’t even begin to guess the temperature out here. He took off his sweaty t-shirt, wiped his brow with it, and tied it around his waist. He looked at his watch. When he called them, his auto club had said a tow truck should have been there ten minutes ago.

 

“Stupid idiot,” Max muttered under his breath. This whole plan had been his own cockamamie idea to get back in touch with “the people,” to find out where his company went wrong, and to see where they could inject new energy into their restaurants. But it looked as if things would be a bust from the word “go.”

 

His family, the Van Burens, owned a chain of Mexican restaurants called Tio Jose’s, or TJ’s for short. The initial business had been started by his Mexican great-grandfather, Jose Hernandez Gonzalez, who sold fresh tacos from a cart in Los Angeles before upgrading to a small stand. His daughter was Max’s grandmother, Carmen Santana, a woman said to be so beautiful and voluptuous men would skip a breath at the sight of her. She married Carlson Van Buren, much to the moneyed Van Buren family’s shock and dismay. When great-grandfather Jose died, Carl Van Buren suddenly noticed how successful the little taco stand had become and additional dollar signs flashed before his eyes. Carl, with Carmen’s blessing, took the initial restaurant idea and turned it into what would become a 200 location national restaurant chain specializing in mid-priced Mexican food, using Jose’s old recipes of course.

 

Years later, Max had inherited the CEO position, but under his watch and with the downsizing economy, TJ’s had begun to lose ground and fast. At the last board meeting, Max had been told to turn things around quickly or expect to be replaced.

 

Maxwell Van Buren, thirty-two years old, six-foot two, dazzling smile, well-defined body and charm that could talk a Catholic nun into giving up her habit had never grown accustomed to failures of any kind. Failure had simply not been a word in his vocabulary. He sure as hell would not start now. After studying piles of customer survey data with his younger brother, Stuart, Max noticed a trend. Customers felt that TJ’s offered nothing special that could not be found anywhere else and for a cheaper price. The customer service rating also left a lot to be desired.

 

That’s when Max had what he hoped would be the saving idea to turn things around. He gathered a team of assistants to research small-town Mexican restaurants that were thriving, even in this economy. He wanted to see firsthand what these establishments were doing that his big chain company didn’t do. No contracted out research company for him. Max wanted to get into the nitty-gritty himself.

 

A one-week trip with ten stops through Arizona, Nevada, and California was planned. Max instructed his staff to only contact him in an emergency and left everything else in Stuart’s hands. He wanted to have a clear head during his expedition. He wanted to see what was needed to bring the heart back to TJ’s and its customers back to the dining room.

 

“So much for careful planning. And I wanted to get into the nitty-gritty…,” Max said to himself, glancing down at his watch, feeling hot and tired.

 

He hadn’t even made it to his first stop in Primrose, Arizona.

Finally, in the distance, he saw a tow truck approaching.

 

“About damn time,” he growled, his mouth feeling as dry and rough as the surrounding landscape.

 

The tow truck skidded to a stop behind his Corolla and to his utter surprise, a tall, alluring Latina, with long curly dark hair hopped down from the bed of the truck. She wore a green t-shirt which read “Find THE Flan at Tia Maria’s” and a pair of worn jeans. She sauntered up towards him and called out, “Having some problems?”

Review:

I will admit that I’m a complete sucker for this troupe.  Sexy billionaire, lost his way in his life/work, neglected as a child, two brothers, family business troubles and wildly attracted to the complete opposite of who he beds.  Single mom, cute kid, family run business is losing money, family member gets sick and everyone loves her.  Let’s not forget that he doesn’t tell her the truth about himself until after they’ve slept together.  *sigh*  Yep, I’m a sucker.

What sets this story apart are a couple of things:

1.  The opening of the story.  We get to see the hero make an ass of himself and he doesn’t have a shirt on.  Yum!  Also, we are introduced to the heroine immediately.  She’s strong, sexy and has a smart mouth.  Love it!

2.  The child in the movie isn’t the “cute” kid.  He is pivotal to the plot and to the growth of the hero.  It is nicely done in the book and expertly written.

3.  The family member that gets sick could have been filler but in this case, it was wisely used.  It brought the emotional depth for our heroine and we learn that our hero does have a beating heart.

4.  When they do come together, it’s not wine, roses, a charity ball and being dressed to the hilt.  For this couple, they just got back from the county fair and it was in the backroom/bedroom of the restaurant.  Plus, its not graphic but sensual and emotional.  *sigh*

5.  One of the hero’s brothers “disapproves” of the hero’s relationship with the heroine not does he like what the hero is doing with his life at this moment.  He is the perfect “villain/foil” in the story.

The above could have been written badly but Ms. Foster writes it with a deft and light touch.  She brings emotional depth to her characters and to the story itself.  Max remembers the teachings of his grandfather and brings that to his own company in the end.  Allie remembers what she is missing in her life and also what it means to be a woman.  She’s never weak or wavering in her thoughts, words or deeds.  Head strong to a fault but gentle and kind.

I wish more authors that write this type of book would remember why readers like me read this stories.  I like my hero flawed but not too flawed that he can’t figure things out for himself.  Max doesn’t shout at people or make the people around him feel like a piece of trash that can be thrown away.  I like my heroine strong, sexy, self confident and reliant.  Allie doesn’t “need” a man to rescue her, the restaurant or help her overcome some huge obstacle.  She has her big girl panties on and doesn’t lose sight of what’s important.

Bravo to Ms. Foster for writing a book about two strong, independent characters that together are even better.  They make each other better and are there for each other.  I can’t wait to see which brother she writes about next.  🙂

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

About the Author:

Tabitha Foster grew up in theSanta Barbarawine country and not far from the beautifulPacific Oceancoastline.  She currently lives in theLos   Angelesarea and is hard at work on the next installment in the Van Buren Brothers series.

 

Connect with Tabatha Foster:

http://www.chancespress.com/tabithafoster.html

 

 

1 thought on “Short Order Daddy, Surprise Billionaire (the Van Buren Brothers Series, Book 1) by Tabatha Foster – Review”

  1. I really liked this story too just for the reasons you mentioned – I thought the romance was sweet and it’s nice seeing an Alpha male who can use his brains and not just his brawn and hotness to get what he wants

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